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Simple Hunger (Steve Crooks)

I've often thought
it might come out better
if we try again

I'm glad you came
this quiet day

Sorry for the mess
but please come in

I haven't done much
differently
more slowly perhaps

It really does me good
to be with you

Many times
I've looked and wondered
how it is with you

Simple thoughts
but hungry, too.

Comments

Good to see your work again, Steve. This is simple, but profound.

this is kind of catchy.

my fav. lines:

Sorry for the mess
but please come in

Enjoyed

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