Simple Hunger (Steve Crooks)
I've often thought
it might come out better
if we try again
I'm glad you came
this quiet day
Sorry for the mess
but please come in
I haven't done much
differently
more slowly perhaps
It really does me good
to be with you
Many times
I've looked and wondered
how it is with you
Simple thoughts
but hungry, too.
Good to see your work again, Steve. This is simple, but profound.
Posted by: aurora | September 06, 2008 at 11:54 PM
this is kind of catchy.
my fav. lines:
Sorry for the mess
but please come in
Posted by: janet | September 09, 2008 at 11:00 PM
Enjoyed
Posted by: Robert | September 16, 2008 at 01:15 PM