around the edges
of my new hand mirror,
faux jewels glitter
as if such distraction
could brighten the view
a new heart charm,
another year of union;
I’ve wondered, though,
what happens when
all the links have been filled
my stolen
Valentine pendant,
at its center
a golden, mythical bird
wings no longer mine
--janet lynn davis
published in MET, 2006; "my stolen" also in Fire Pearls, 2006.
I enjoyed each of these. Good to see some tanka here. :)
Posted by: Aurora Antonovic | May 11, 2007 at 12:34 PM
thanks, a. am hoping there'll be some more tanka posted here myself...
Posted by: janet lynn davis | May 11, 2007 at 03:53 PM
Hi, Janet. Good series
Posted by: Matt | May 11, 2007 at 04:32 PM
thanks, matt.
Posted by: janet lynn davis | May 12, 2007 at 01:51 PM