« urban haiku | Main | »
Very clever.
Posted by:Claire | October 28, 2007 at 08:30 PM
I think that image works well with the words because of the snake-like, and shadow-like effect.
Posted by:aurora | October 28, 2007 at 08:41 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by:Robert | October 28, 2007 at 09:35 PM
most excellent.
Posted by:eric | October 28, 2007 at 11:00 PM
One of your best, Shane, and that's the best of an excellent lot. The photo is great in itself, and the combination is extremely powerful.
Posted by:Bill | October 29, 2007 at 08:16 AM
This is definitely a Grabber and a Keeper, Shane. I even like the fact that I had to squint to read the poem -- and that I have no idea what is going on in the photo. The uncertainty increases the echo in the verse.
Posted by:david giacalone | October 29, 2007 at 08:51 AM
Good one, Shane.
Posted by:Matt | October 29, 2007 at 02:50 PM
I really like this... excellent poem!
Posted by:Andrea | October 29, 2007 at 03:28 PM
The comments to this entry are closed.
More...
Very clever.
Posted by:Claire | October 28, 2007 at 08:30 PM
I think that image works well with the words because of the snake-like, and shadow-like effect.
Posted by:aurora | October 28, 2007 at 08:41 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by:Robert | October 28, 2007 at 09:35 PM
most excellent.
Posted by:eric | October 28, 2007 at 11:00 PM
One of your best, Shane, and that's the best of an excellent lot. The photo is great in itself, and the combination is extremely powerful.
Posted by:Bill | October 29, 2007 at 08:16 AM
This is definitely a Grabber and a Keeper, Shane. I even like the fact that I had to squint to read the poem -- and that I have no idea what is going on in the photo. The uncertainty increases the echo in the verse.
Posted by:david giacalone | October 29, 2007 at 08:51 AM
Good one, Shane.
Posted by:Matt | October 29, 2007 at 02:50 PM
I really like this... excellent poem!
Posted by:Andrea | October 29, 2007 at 03:28 PM