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Very clever.

I think that image works well with the words because of the snake-like, and shadow-like effect.

Enjoyed.

most excellent.

One of your best, Shane, and that's the best of an excellent lot. The photo is great in itself, and the combination is extremely powerful.

This is definitely a Grabber and a Keeper, Shane. I even like the fact that I had to squint to read the poem -- and that I have no idea what is going on in the photo. The uncertainty increases the echo in the verse.

Good one, Shane.

I really like this... excellent poem!

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