crowded bar--
the waitress writes
a little poem
(Italian Version)
bar affollato--
la cameriera scrive
una poesia
(Previously published on my book "Mandarini dopo il diguno")
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Ah...Andrea, I love it! Your poem suggest that we are all poets at heart. Even in a crowded bar the poetess has found something to inspire her.
I'm enjoying these bar senryu. Which reminds me, can you change the category of your poem from "haiku" to "senryu"? That way, your poem will be listed along with Bill's and mine. (Clicking on the category would display all three together.)
Posted by:Curtis Dunlap | February 17, 2008 at 04:05 PM
Ok... it's done! Thanks for your kind words, by the way!
Posted by:Andrea | February 17, 2008 at 04:15 PM
Now I wonder what she was writing about! :) Good capture, Andrea.
Posted by:aurora | February 17, 2008 at 11:14 PM
I love it, Andrea! I agree with Curt's comment about it too.
For some reason, I have the urge to go to a bar right now.
Posted by:collin | February 18, 2008 at 12:03 AM
Thanks Aurora and Collin!
(Collin... I hope you'll find the right inspiration in that bar! :-))
Posted by:Andrea | February 18, 2008 at 06:06 AM
Very nice, Andrea. I bet there are a lot of poets lurking inside waitresses and bartenders.
Posted by:david giacalone | February 18, 2008 at 10:06 AM
I can't resist: Do you come here often?
More urgently, does anyone know a good hangover cure?
(Full disclosure: Valentine's Day marked my 30th anniverary in sobriety.)
I like this in both versions, Andrea.
Posted by:Bill Kenney | February 18, 2008 at 12:22 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by:Robert | February 18, 2008 at 06:06 PM
thats it, man
Posted by:Cambriaxa | March 24, 2008 at 02:08 PM
Yes, that's it! :-)
Posted by:Andrea | March 24, 2008 at 04:08 PM