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happy hour

he tells me again

he doesn't miss her

(Published in Sketchbook)

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"he tells me again" really makes this work for me.

Nothing happy about that hour. Good one.

Thanks, Aurora and Bryan. During one of his sober periods, Truman Capote said that one of the things he noticed was how his friends tended to repeat themselves after six o'clock. In lower rent districts than Capote frequented, happy hour starts a bit earlier.

well done, Bill!

bill and andrea -- more "booze" haiku at magnapoets...we have quite a collection here now! i like them both.

Thank you, andrea and Janet.

Excellent.

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