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news of destruction lacing my nike tighter

(Modern Haiku, 38.2)

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Nicely layered.

Dietmar, nice one-line senryu. Whether it be a natural disaster or man-made, one must always be vigilant and prepared. Great poem!

says a lot!

Great jux, Dietmar.

Great one-line poem, Dietmar! I like it so much...

thank you so much for the kind comments--bw--dietmar

Nice one!

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