news of destruction lacing my nike tighter
(Modern Haiku, 38.2)
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Nicely layered.
Posted by: aurora | March 06, 2008 at 11:06 AM
Dietmar, nice one-line senryu. Whether it be a natural disaster or man-made, one must always be vigilant and prepared. Great poem!
Posted by: Curtis | March 09, 2008 at 07:29 AM
says a lot!
Posted by: janet | March 09, 2008 at 02:58 PM
Great jux, Dietmar.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | March 09, 2008 at 05:20 PM
Great one-line poem, Dietmar! I like it so much...
Posted by: Andrea | March 09, 2008 at 06:20 PM
thank you so much for the kind comments--bw--dietmar
Posted by: Dietmar Tauchner | March 10, 2008 at 03:30 PM
Nice one!
Posted by: Yu Chang | March 12, 2008 at 09:59 AM