train whistle
a gust of wind moves
the windmill’s arms
published in Riverbed Haiku, spring 2008
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Posted by:Robert | March 27, 2008 at 08:00 AM
Wonderful
Posted by:Jennifer | March 27, 2008 at 08:43 AM
Good to see your work here again, Petar. I love the resonance between "train whistle" and "a gust of wind", and the progression from sound to visible movement.
Posted by:aurora | March 27, 2008 at 10:16 AM
very, very nice. and ditto what a.a. said.
Posted by:janet | March 27, 2008 at 10:35 AM
Beautiful, Petar.
reading haiku
so long since I've heard
a train whistle
Posted by:Bill Kenney | March 27, 2008 at 11:51 AM
Thank you all!
Posted by:Petar Tchouhov | March 30, 2008 at 04:10 AM