in hospital sheets
tangled white and frail
my roommate
stares back at me
with my own mortality
first published in MET
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a powerful, sort of haunting, ending.
Posted by: janet | April 19, 2008 at 11:36 AM
whoa
Posted by: matt | April 19, 2008 at 07:35 PM
Deep...
Posted by: Masago | April 19, 2008 at 11:33 PM
good one aa
Posted by: kai | April 20, 2008 at 12:57 PM
Deeply poignant.
Posted by: Felicia | April 20, 2008 at 10:10 PM
One of your best.
Posted by: Dhani | April 20, 2008 at 10:23 PM
Thanks, all.
Posted by: aurora | April 23, 2008 at 05:24 PM
I agree with Dani.
Posted by: Robert | April 23, 2008 at 06:31 PM
Playing catch-up. This reminds me of things I'd rather forget. I mean that as praise.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | April 24, 2008 at 09:45 AM
having just been in hospital this really spoke to me...
peace and love
Posted by: Barbara A Taylor | April 27, 2008 at 01:03 AM
Robert, Bill, and Barbara (welcome:) ) - thank you.
Posted by: aurora | April 28, 2008 at 09:06 AM
While you it will not concern, it is difficult to understand... Very deeply...
Posted by: Alex | May 04, 2008 at 04:35 PM