more than once
I've ended up lost
in this maze of a town,
on my way to
nowhere in particular
"Tanka Cafe," Ribbons, spring 2008
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...strolling about the city and losing oneself...
I know that feeling.
Great poem, Janet! I like it very much!
Posted by: Andrea | April 23, 2008 at 02:53 PM
Good capture.
Posted by: aurora | April 23, 2008 at 02:59 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by: Robert | April 23, 2008 at 06:26 PM
I don't know how many times we got lost in Venice, but, wherever we were, we were glad to be there. "nowhere in particular" is my favorite destination. Nicely caught.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | April 24, 2008 at 07:03 PM
Seems I've gotten lost in the city quite a bit - literally and figuratively. Many thanks for the comments, you four.
Posted by: janet | April 24, 2008 at 11:27 PM
Very poignant. I love the idea of getting lost on my way to nowhere in particular. Very original.
all my best,
Alan
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Posted by: Alan Summers | May 05, 2008 at 11:15 AM