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starry night the darkness between fireflies

(Published in Acorn #20)

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Nice!

I like your focus in this poem. It's a little different than what most would emphasize (the darkness), thus bringing fuller emphasis to the real "star" of the poem - the fireflies.

Thanks, Andrea. And I appreciate that careful and thoughtful reading, Aurora.

Enjoyed.

Very much and very much!!!

Thanks, Robert and Alex.

Beautiful. 'starry night' has some nice allusions as well.

all my best,

Alan
Less than a month to the deadline!
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition

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