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starry night the darkness between fireflies

(Published in Acorn #20)

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Nice!

I like your focus in this poem. It's a little different than what most would emphasize (the darkness), thus bringing fuller emphasis to the real "star" of the poem - the fireflies.

Thanks, Andrea. And I appreciate that careful and thoughtful reading, Aurora.

Enjoyed.

Very much and very much!!!

Thanks, Robert and Alex.

Beautiful. 'starry night' has some nice allusions as well.

all my best,

Alan
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