through the rain
I lead you to my home
for dinner...
the look on your face
when you find out I can cook

first published in Tanka Cafe
photo taken and copyrighted by keithandlaura

Comments

[Masago]

:-)

[Robert]

Superb.

[Bill Kenney]

We men are simple creatures, aren't we?

[janet]

i read this in tanka cafe v. recently. the last line is priceless. v. good.

[Felicia]

(smile)

[kai]

awwwwww

[borut]

The look of the cook.:)

[aurora]

Thanks all.

[kirsty]

Incredibly gorgeous photograph...really!

[Alex]

Very gently!

сквозь дождь веду вас
домой к себе обедать…
какая мина
когда вы узнаете
что я могу готовить

Alex Sanders