yoga 101 (tanka sequence)
traffic
thick
two minutes late to class—
the yogis
in their cross-legged worlds
my own breaths rapid
our
teacher
asks if we enjoy
the sun salute. . .
rebellious today
in my mind, I say “no”
to be a graceful tree. . .
we are told
all trees shake and sway
(some are even uprooted?)
resting on the ground
~ breathe in, breathe out ~
for thirty seconds
I am a child again
I own no
pets
yet a whole menagerie
here today:
happy bear, sailing swan
and briefly, a butterfly
ah,
arching cat
and stretching its hind legs
the downward dog—
my muscles challenged
as my identity wanes
at the mountain lookout. . .
steady arms
outstretched against the wind,
I am a proud warrior
and now
a corpse
with visions of light, until—
the bell’s cold peal
signaling the end of class
shocking me back to life!
Author’s notes: Words in italics indicate specific yoga
poses. The child pose can also be referred to as fallen
leaf.
pub'd in Lynx.
My Dad was a dancer and he practiced yoga regularly, so as I read this I could see all the poses. :) I remember once being quite small and copying him, and I did the move where you lift your abdomen up under your ribs. It really looks quite awful, particularly on a lean child, and my mother screamed when she saw me. :)
Posted by: aurora | April 07, 2008 at 11:55 PM
Enjoyed.
Posted by: Robert | April 08, 2008 at 03:55 PM
thanks, you two, for reading and commenting.
Posted by: janet | April 09, 2008 at 04:07 PM
:)
i would like to learn yoga
Posted by: kai | April 12, 2008 at 11:05 AM
Imaginative use of a pre-existing terminology. Works at every level.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | April 12, 2008 at 04:46 PM
kai, hi. i'd like to get back to yoga sometime. i haven't been able to take class for a while.
bill, thanks. if i'm remembering correctly, each one of those poses mentioned were done in one particular class that I ended writing about. and arriving a bit late to class would happen to me fairly often.
Posted by: janet | April 13, 2008 at 10:42 PM