blossoming rapeseeds -
small wrinkles
at the corner of her eyes
***
colzas en fleur -
de petites rides
au coin de ses yeux
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Colzas and wrinkles, good juxtaposing.
all my best,
Alan
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Posted by: Alan Summers | May 10, 2008 at 02:16 PM
Well, I feel stupid, but I'm not sure I know what colzas are. Are they similar to rapeseed?
Posted by: aurora | May 10, 2008 at 03:10 PM
Pretty much the same, I believe, Aurora.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | May 10, 2008 at 08:14 PM
Yes Aurora, I've found the translation : colza is rape : a bright yellow flower
Thank you
Posted by: damien gabriels | May 11, 2008 at 02:07 AM
Thanks Bill and Damien. I agree with Alan then that the juxtaposition is a good one! :)
Posted by: aurora | May 11, 2008 at 10:44 AM
Enjoyed.
Posted by: Robert | May 13, 2008 at 06:12 PM