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blossoming rapeseeds -

small wrinkles

at the corner of her eyes

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colzas en fleur -

de petites rides

au coin de ses yeux

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Colzas and wrinkles, good juxtaposing.

all my best,

Alan
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Well, I feel stupid, but I'm not sure I know what colzas are. Are they similar to rapeseed?

Pretty much the same, I believe, Aurora.

Yes Aurora, I've found the translation : colza is rape : a bright yellow flower
Thank you

Thanks Bill and Damien. I agree with Alan then that the juxtaposition is a good one! :)

Enjoyed.

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