dusk
the brook becomes
its sound
(Published in World Haiku Review)
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Bill, your ku conveys an endless peace: I love it...
Posted by: Andrea | May 15, 2008 at 11:09 AM
Very Zen, Bill.
Posted by: aurora | May 16, 2008 at 11:11 AM
Bill,
Excellent as always, my friend. I can definitely see this one? Thank you for taking me to this scene.
Collin
Posted by: collin | May 25, 2008 at 12:47 AM
This has got all your stamp of unity — Bill!
Posted by: kala ramesh | May 25, 2008 at 04:31 AM
Sorry for the slow response. I've just (less than an hour ago) returned from a delightful visit to California. Andrea, Aurora, Collin, and Kala, your comments are deeply appreciated.
Posted by: Bill Kenney | June 02, 2008 at 11:51 PM